i knew it was a ramah alter, i just couldnt remember the name to save my life. thanks for having a better memory than me!
i'm calling BS .... no way that's ramah's ghost 'cause he didn't say anything derogatory towards AU *wink*
i miss ramah but this isnt him. this was terrible prose and I am greatly disappointed. unfortunately, ramah is still being detained by the saudi post office.
im disappointed no one drove off a cliff in malta, or threw a molotov cocktail into an opponents building. it just lacked that jacked up action.:bncry:
You may be good. One of the worst slights that poets suffer is to have their work criticized for being "prosy".